jueves, 4 de noviembre de 2010

Argumentative essay...!!!

Should there still be schools just for girls and some just for boys?

Outline:

1.Thesis statement:
Thoughtout the time there has been many differences in education
1.2.Different kind of education for boys /girls
1.3.It depends on the social position
1.4.Ss ' parents decide where their sons /daugther are going to study.

2.Talking about private elementary education there are more restrictions is those institutions, for example: ss are not free they have to follow strict rules.
2.1.According to studies of children form around the world students achieve more and learn better in singl sex schools.
2.2.The social status is more evident in private education, people with higher status have better opprotunities to study.

3.Why do girls and boys have to be in separate schools?
3.1.Both have the right to spend the time together in the same classrooms of their schools.
3.2.The concept of an all ₋boys school implies that girls are a distraction.

4.At an all girls and boys schools do not prepare students for the real world.
4.1.Usually girls are sensitive and shy and some boys are aggressive, so both need to be in mixed sex schools, to face the world.
4.2.Girls become more confident in themselves as students and earn higher scores on the school.

5.Conclusion
5.1. Boys and girls have the same abilities to be someone in the life and to achieve any objective that they want. Single sex schools do not help students to be someone differente, it is just a stereotype that catholic people have.

Essay

Education has changed through the time, nowadays there are new institutions, programs, methods, techniques that help to innovate the ways to educate, however a tradition that has been criticized a lot by the society and has some points to favor and some against is single sex schools this is a controversial topic because it has several points of view, some people prefer mixed schools, where boys and girls can live together. In addition, single sex schools are private institutions that can obtain negative results for the students. This kind of schools have many disadvantages but for some people it is the best way of studying because they think that they have more advantages than to study in a mixed public elementary school. This essay explains more about why it is better to be in a mixed sex elementary school.

Private elementary schools can not be a good option to choose and to decide to study there, and less to think to stay in a single sex school, unfortunately in these kind of institutions are very stricted because of the rules that they have, and obviously every student has to follow all these rules exactly. The students can not behave as they are, because this can cause them punishments or bad grades. On the other hand, "an Australian study of 270,000 students found that boys and girls performed significantly higher on standardized tests when they attend separate schools"(cuote). This means that it can be better to be in a single sex school, because students feel more confident with their classmates, they do not feel embarrassed when they participate in any class and they get more selfesteem.

Boys and girls have different qualities and they act different all the time, but this does not meand that because of that they need to go to different schools. Boys and girls need to spend the time together to know how it is a boy or a girl, this is very important for their future, because sometimes they get confused about their sexuality, and they can not define what they want or what they prefer, boys or girls and finally they become in gay people. Also it is important when they are adults how to choose the correct person, for example to find a wife or a husband, because they already know how boys and girls behave, and they have the possibility to choose which is the best person. On the contrary, "according to a British study, concluded that nearly every girl regardless on her ability or socieconomic status performed better in single sex classrooms than co ₋ed ones" ( ) Maybe because girls do not complete a lot, like in a mixed school that boys and girls are competing all the time, to demonstrate who is better in all senses. And others studies say that "the concept of an all ₋ boys school implies girls are a distraction" ( .)

Another disadvantage of studying in a single sex school is that there the students are not prepared for the real world they can not know the precautions that they should take for example when a boy has a girlfriend or viceversa in those schools do not give conversations about sex, drogs, alcoholism, so this is very bad because nowadays they are topics very important for the daily life. However, "almost 90% of girls in mixed high schools are affected by some form of sexual harassment" ( ). So each case is very different, it mostly depends on the country, city and place where this can happen. It is more common that girls suffer this, but even boys are not free of this horrible situation. In whatever place girls and boys can be victims of different kind of abuse.

As a conclusion to study in a single sex school have advantages and disadvantages but I think that this option is not appropiate at all, because boys and girls have the right to spend the time together, to learn one of the other, to know more about the other sex, their behavor, likes and dislikes, like this everybody can have the possibility to decide what to do, to compete, to choose, etc. When boys and girls are together they can combine the abilities of each sex, to get something better for example in any subject, they share their knowledge and boys are very good for the sport and girls for art and handcrafts, so for all these reasons it is better to study in a separate school. And the best way to study is in a mixed sex school.


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Argumentative essay...!!!


Should there still be schools just for girls and some just for boys?

Outline:

1.Thesis statement:Thoughtout the time there has been many differences in education
1.2.Different kind of education for boys /girls
1.3.It depends on the social position
1.4.Ss ' parents decide where their sons /daugther are going to study.

2.Talking about private elementary education there are more restrictions is those institutions, for example: ss are not free they have to follow strict rules.
2.1.According to studies of children form around the world students achieve more and learn better in singl sex schools.
2.2.The social status is more evident in private education, people with higher status have better opprotunities to study.

3.Why do girls and boys have to be in separate schools?
3.1.Both have the right to spend the time together in the same classrooms of their schools.
3.2.The concept of an all ₋boys school implies that girls are a distraction.

4.At an all girls and boys schools do not prepare students for the real world.
4.1.Usually girls are sensitive and shy and some boys are aggressive, so both need to be in mixed sex schools, to face the world.
4.2.Girls become more confident in themselves as students and earn higher scores on the school.

5.Conclusion
5.1. Boys and girls have the same abilities to be someone in the life and to achieve any objective that they want. Single sex schools do not help students to be someone different, it is just a stereotype that catholic people have.

Essay

Education has changed through the time, nowadays there are new institutions, programs, methods, techniques that help to innovate the ways to educate, however a tradition that has been criticized a lot by the society and has some points in favor and some against is single sex schools this is a controversial topic because it has several points of view, some people prefer mixed schools, where boys and girls can spend time together. In addition, single sex schools are private institutions that can obtain negative results for the students. This kind of schools have many disadvantages but for some people it is the best way of studying because they think that they have more advantages than to study in a mixed public elementary school. This essay explains more about why it is better to be in a mixed sex elementary school.

Private elementary schools cannot be an option to choose and to decide to study there, to think to stay in a single sex school, unfortunately in these kinds of institutions are very strict because of the rules that they have, and obviously every student has to follow all these rules exactly. The students can not behave as they are, because this can cause them punishments or bad grades. On the other hand, according to an Australian study of 270,000 students found that boys and girls performed significantly higher on standardized tests when they attend separate schools"(N.A., 2008, retrieved on November 1st, 2010). This means that it can be better to be in a single sex school, because students feel more confident with their classmates, they do not feel embarrassed when they participate in any class and they get more self-esteem.

Boys and girls have different qualities and they behave differently all the time, but this does not mean that because of that they need to go to different schools. Boys and girls need to spend the time together to know how it is a boy or a girl, this is very important for their future, because sometimes they get confused about their sexuality, and they cannot define what they want or what they prefer, boys or girls and finally they become in gay people. Also it is important when they are adults how to choose the correct person, for example to find a wife or a husband, because they already know how boys and girls behave, and they have the possibility to choose which the best person is. On the contrary, "according to a British study, concluded that nearly every girl regardless on her ability or socieconomic status performed better in single sex classrooms than co ₋ed ones" (N.A., 2008, retrieved on November 1st, 2010). Maybe because girls do not complete a lot, like in a mixed school that boys and girls are competing all the time, to demonstrate who is better in all senses. And others studies say that "the concept of an all ₋ boys school implies girls are a distraction" Kristy King June, 2010 wrote in his article. (retrieved on November 1st,2010)

Another disadvantage to study in a single sex school is that there the students are not prepared for the world they cannot know the precautions that they should take for example when a boy has a girlfriend or viceversa in those schools do not talk about Sex, drugs, alcoholism, so this is very bad because nowadays they are topics very important for the daily life. However, "almost 90% of girls in mixed high schools are affected by some form of sexual harassment" (N.A., 2008, retrieved on November 1st, 2010 ). So each case is very different, it mostly depends on the country, city and place where this can happen. It is more common that girls suffer this, but even boys are not free of this horrible situation. In whatever place girls and boys can be victims of different kind of abuse.

As a conclusion to study in a single sex school has advantages and disadvantages but I think that this option is not appropiate at all, because boys and girls have the right to spend the time together, to learn one from the other, to know more about the other sex, their behavior, likes and dislikes, like this everybody can have the possibility to decide what to do, to compete, to choose, etc. When boys and girls are together they can combine the abilities of each sex, to get something better for example in any subject, they share their knowledge and boys are very good for the sport and girls for art and handcrafts, so for all these reasons it is better to study in a separate school. And the best way to study is in a mixed sex school.

1 comentario:

  1. hi friend!!!
    I liked you essay but I think that you should write more aspects to talk about, also I noticed that you did not write the references in parenthesis be careful!!

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