martes, 12 de octubre de 2010

"My first class at the university"
Outline:
1.Introduction
1.1 An unforgettable day
1.2 Different thoughts

2. Arriving to the classroom
2.1 Good classroom atmosphere
2.2 Big and comfortable classroom
2.3 Good classroom equipment

3. Feelings inside the classroom
3.1 My expectations in that moment
3.2 Strange sentations

4. Enviroment between teacher and student
4.1 Respect relation between them
4.2 My classmates´physical appearance

5. Conclusion


"My first class at the university"
A special moment keeps inside ot us for all the time. We always remember that important happening, because it is relevant in our lives. I can not forget my first day at the university. I think that it really was a great day, it was the beggining of my career and I had many expectations, feelings, sentations and thoughts. This is a descriptive essay and it describes an unforgettable day of my life. how it was, the enviroment, how my classmates looked. "Convert a simple moment in one extraordinary".
August 16th, 2007, it was a suuny and quiet afternoon of monday. That day I arrived to my biG and comfortable classroom which was gray with many chairs, a white big board, at thte fornt a white desk. I really had good classroom equipment. I was sorprides because of the conditions of my new classroom, I breathed different air that means that there was a good classroom atmosphere. "Feel each moment i nyour life, do not leave anyone"
There was a combination of sensations and feelings that day. I felt everything, I saw each detail of the classroom, I thought a thousands of things, I was paying attention to each one of my classmates. When I was inside of the classroom I felt very sure, I sat dawn in a gray chair at the back of the classroom but alone, most of my classmates were looking at me, I was wearing a pink shirt, jeans, and a pink pair of shoes, my hair was blond and long, so I looked beautiful, I wanted to impact everybody. "It does not matter how you wear the important is how you transmit your sequrity".
A class can not start without a teacher. So a white woman got into the classroom, she was very pretty and smart, she had big and blue eyes, huge eyelashes, freckled face, blond, curly and long hair, very thin and she started her class, it was very dinamyc, we presented ourselves. I remember the classmates´faces, they seemed like nervous, there were people from different ages from 17 to 36 years, so each one of them looked with different attitude. All of them and I were participative, we wanted to meet each other, so we tried to make several conversations. The relationship between us was very direct and respectfully. Most of the students were men, some of them with a beard, mustache, tall, thin, overweight, heavy, broad chested, handsome and a specific boy was very shapely, with flat chested I liked that boy.
You have many moments in your life, but you have to keep in mind one wonderful happening. Probably it makes you feel happy or smile; when you remember it you can live it again. That special Monday is unforgettable for me. I knew new people, I was in a different place (university), I felt a lot of things, sensations, and a combination of feelings. It is strange when this happens because a few times it could happen, and I remember that day like the best day of my life. “Try to combine, happiness and fun, you would get good experiences”. A descriptive essay helps to imagine a situation and see in your mind what the writer wants to describe.
"My first class at the university"

Outline:

1.Introduction
1.1 An unforgettable day
1.2 Different thoughts
2. Arriving to the classroom
2.1 Good classroom atmosphere
2.2 Big and comfortable classroom
2.3 Good classroom equipment
3. Feelings inside the classroom
3.1 My expectations in that moment
3.2 Strange sentations
4. Enviroment between teacher and student
4.1 Respect relation between them
4.2 My classmates´physical appearance
5. Conclusion
"My first class at the university"

A special moment keeps inside of us for all the time. We always remember that important happening, because it is relevant in our lives. I can not forget my first day at the university. I think that it really was a great day, it was the beginning of my career and I had many expectations, feelings, sensations and thoughts. This is a descriptive essay and it describes an unforgettable day of my life. How it was, the environment, how my classmates looked. "Convert a simple moment in one extraordinary".

August 16th, 2007, it was a sunny and quiet afternoon of Monday. That day I arrived to my big and comfortable classroom which was gray with many chairs, a white big board, at the front a white desk. I really had good classroom equipment. I was surprised because of the conditions of my new classroom; I breathed different air that means that there was a good classroom atmosphere. "Feel each moment in your life, do not leave anyone"

There was a combination of sensations and feelings that day. I felt everything, I saw each detail of the classroom, I thought a thousand of things, and I was paying attention to each one of my classmates. When I was inside of the classroom I felt very sure, I sat dawn in a gray chair at the back of the classroom but alone, most of my classmates were looking at me, I was wearing a pink shirt, jeans, and a pink pair of shoes, my hair was blond and long, so I looked beautiful, I wanted to impact everybody. "It does not matter how you wear the important is how you transmit your security".

A class can not start without a teacher. So a white woman got into the classroom, she was very pretty and smart, she had big and blue eyes, huge eyelashes, freckled face, blond, curly and long hair, very thin and she started her class, it was very dynamic, we presented ourselves. I remember the classmates´ faces, they seemed like nervous, there were people from different ages from 17 to 36 years, so each one of them looked with different attitude. All of them and I were participative, we wanted to meet each other, so we tried to make several conversations. The relationship between us was very direct and respectfully. Most of the students were men, some of them with a beard, mustache, tall, thin, overweight, heavy, broad chested, handsome and a specific boy was very shapely, with flat chested I liked that boy.

You have many moments in your life, but you have to keep in mind one wonderful happening. Probably it makes you feel happy or smile; when you remember it you can live it again. That special Monday is unforgettable for me. I knew new people, I was in a different place (university), I felt a lot of things, sensations, and a combination of feelings. It is strange when this happens because a few times it could happen, and I remember that day like the best day of my life. “Try to combine, happiness and fun, you would get good experiences”. A descriptive essay helps to imagine a situation and see in your mind what the writer wants to describe.

1 comentario:

  1. Hello ceci!!!
    well, I liked your essay but maybe you should give more details about the things that you mentioned in order to make it more creative and less narrative

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